The crystal water was so clear I could see the bottom of the ocean. I could see the clustered stones lie beneath the rough sand. So I stepped in the warm tense water and lead back. Then all of a sudden gushing waves pulled me away from the beach edge. Then my head started to sink beneath the surface, then the waves stopped and I stood up the in the water it was quite shallow, and I could smell the salty air. As I was walking over to my parents I realized they weren't there. I panicked. Where were they?
By Mollie.T
An intriguing post Mollie. I like that you have used a range of adjectives to enhance your description. I wonder where her parents went?
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