THE SEA SERPENT ATTACKS!
He loved the sand between his toes; he wished he could stay there all day. However, he had to get out to sea and catch some fish for his village, or they would starve. So he grabbed his net, jumped into his boat and set of. That day the crystal water was so clear you could see the bottom of the ocean.
When he got out to sea, he threw his net out into the water and pulled with all his might and tonnes of fish came pilling in and he knew that his father (the greatest fisherman in the whole village) would be proud of him.
Then something big caught his eye. It had long spinderly legs, massive claws dripping with green goo. It was a giant CRAB.
Wow! You have got a fantastic story idea from the prompt William. I pleased you have used a range of punctuation, particularly your use of brackets to add more information about his father.
ReplyDeleteNow you have started blogging, keep up the good work!
This was such a great post to read William.I'm so glad you joined the 100 Word Challenge & hope to see you next week!
ReplyDelete