Wednesday 23 March 2011

100 WC

As the elephant was stud under the water the Lion approached from the dark. The Lion slowly strolled up to the vulnerable Elephant. The elephant turned around and hit the Lion with its trunk. The Lion bit the Elephant on the end of the nose. Who will die?

3 comments:

  1. Gosh Owen I do hope you can turn this into a happy story!Thank you so much for linking to the 100WC!

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  2. It is a little violent Owen (although so is the animal kingdom!). I like your vocabulary choices, particularly the words 'strolled' and 'vulnerable'. Try to write a full 100 words next time.

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  3. WOW Owen your work is amazing!

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