Wednesday 23 March 2011

callum's 100wc

I was tricked into going into an haunted house,while on the view of it, the outside of the house looked normal but slightly strange. Before I could even touch the door handle the door darted open! and suddenly the path behind me started to disappear,this place is spooky I thought to myself. I realised this is a candy house! the chairs are made of chocolate,the windows are stripy candy canes and what looks like sugared glass panes. The fridge is actually made of ice cream! I went upstairs after eating some chair,window and some fridge LOL. I went into a bedroom and the clear plastic water bed,was filled with fizzy orange pop and had a giant straw sticking out between two selection box pillows,it also had a candy floss blanket. Oh I was in heaven I thought to myself or was it just a fantastic dream!
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  1. Mrs Irvin23 March 2011 at 21:25

    What a wonderful sounding place and a wonderful description Callum. I love the sound of 'sugared glass panes' and a 'candy floss blanket.'

    Next week have a look carefully at the prompt before writing your post. If you write one that matches the prompt I can link it up to the 100 word challenge site.

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  2. Danielle24 March 2011 at 09:16

    wow, that is great Callum i like it.

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  3. Megan.F.24 March 2011 at 13:33

    YUMMY

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  4. mollie.t24 March 2011 at 13:36

    That is amazing I loved how you used a haunted house as youre setting great work callum.

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  5. Kieran24 March 2011 at 13:46

    good work Callum that would be my dream too

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  6. Owen24 March 2011 at 13:50

    Really good Callum!! =) =)

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  7. jfb5724 March 2011 at 22:09

    This is a such a fun piece Callum. I'm looking forward to you joining the 100WC next week when you have read the prompt.

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