A voice said "Hi." She realised that she recognised the voice it was her brother and his band. They were practising for 'St.Kent's got talent. Katie didn't think they had any. That's what the sound was.
Saturday 26 March 2011
100 word challenge Rachel
Strange...the music seemed to come from the spooky cave. It sounded like a calm melody. Suddenly, there was a huge explosion that made her ears pop. Katie was too curious to stop herself from slowly creeping into the cave. Katie saw something move...she said in a nervous voice "Hello is anyone there?" Something tapped her...she didn't dare to turn round.
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I really like the twist in your writing Rachel. The build up was very mysterious and I wasn't expecting that ending at all! I was wondering, why were her brother's band practising in a cave?
ReplyDeleteBecause it was a surprise for everyone but Katie spoiled it.
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant Rachel - what a lovely 'catch your reader out' ending! You built the tension really brilliantly. See you next week 9on the 100WC!
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