Thursday 24 March 2011

Mazvita's 100 word challenge

As i saw the elphant having a wash.The human preditors watching close by shot the elphant in the leg and left it there, later that evening the elphant lost a little ammount of blood , a stranger was passing by, and saw the elphant down he ran down to the water fall, and badnged the elphants leg he called the rescue team, to come and take the injured elphant and cheack up on the poor elphant they also took the baby elphant in case it got hit too as they arrived the mummy elphant gave birth to a bouncing baby boy later that evening she fell fast asleep next to her children .

1 comment:

  1. This is such a lovely story Mazvitas! Thank you so much for linking to 100WC. Could you think of a different word for elephant maybe? you have got lots of them in this pieces. Perhaps you could use he/she, animal. What do you think?

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