Friday 1 April 2011

Skool Rules

Sam was no ordinary girl she just didn't know when to shut up! She was always complaining about rules in school. There was aura of menace about her even at a distance; when she came close you could almost the dangerous heat radiating from her as from a red-hot rod of metal. When we were playing football, she just starts to swear about rules. Her Mum doesn't know whats she like because she sometimes doesn't come home.

1 comment:

  1. Well done!I loved 'the aura of menace' 'dangerous heat radiating'. Make sure you read through carefully before you post as there is a crucial word missing in the 2nd half of the 2nd sentence.

    Sorry not to use your name but I can't see it.

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