Monday 9 May 2011

100 Word Challenge

As the huge spider launched itself of the web, the ground shuck. He pranced around the school, like a bird waiting for its pray. Many peoples life's had been ended by the murderous creature. Children had nightmares about the mysterious animal. There was hundreds at one point, now theres only one. He pounced like a cat on innocent people, it doesn't matter big or small the humans are, he'll eat them. Just one bite, then your dead. The bell rang for break in the school. The children came outside. What would the horrible creature do? 95 Words.

2 comments:

  1. Megan.F. and Rachel9 May 2011 at 11:49

    We really like your vocab in your 95WC

    Well done :]

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  2. Well done Owen! This is a super piece of writing that tells me how scary the spider is. I doh ope you will join the 100WC again!

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