Annabel could see the spider coming towards Her.
She dived to save myself. Her heart was pounding,
They screamed with fright and ran again, it had found them.
I could see my friend in the corner of my eye,
Letitia was almost squished by curious animal.
Annabel picked up a stone and chucked it at it's leg
It fell with terror, Letitia scrambled away from the
outrageous animal.
The girls ran out of it's sight behind the dustbin.
A girl grabbed us as we were sitting down
she pulled us into a door that we had not
seen,
Monday, 9 May 2011
Annabel and Letitia 100 Word Challenge
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This is a good idea girls but you have got a bit confused between names & I/they. You have used some great words - outrageous,pounding.Thank you both for joining the 100WC this week!
ReplyDeleteA very scary account indeed girls. Well done for joining the 100WC & apologies for my late comment. The site would not let me leave any!
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